twilight tiger

this kept me absorbed! I loved it! the detail, the writing, the way you stuck only to the stuff about the fighting. It was amazing. I only saw about two ...

wow. I read this and was just like, wow. It was wonderful. I liked how the first three lines would rhyme, then the fourth would go into more detail about ...

I liked this. It really sounded like a song to me. Like, I put a tune to it in my head. And made it like I was singing along to ...

I enjoyed this. The imagery was really good; I could picture the scene you presented. Nothing was wrong with it, other than the present tense that changed to past tense. ...

I like the form you wrote it in. It was as though it was a letter or an argument. It was as though I was standing there and hearing you ...

i liked that poem. i agree with the one above me. (forgot the name) but this was really good. I liked that line about the anger being a fire in ...

This poem was really deep. I liked the way you used symbols at the end. The way it changed from long lines full of pain, to short lines filled with ...

this piece was funny! :lol: I enjoyed reading it. It was short and random, just the kind of thing that puts a smile on someone's face, or a laugh bursting ...

I really enjoyed reading this. It was magnificent. The details were wonderful, it made me feel as though it was me that was being touched by Steel. I mean, that ...

" Do you want to dance ? I want to see you move , give me a chance , I'll show you how to groove " I liked your poem. ...

I really liked this. It had depth, rhythm, and it flowed wonderfully. I could sense your pain. It then took a twist to happiness; the smooth U-turn from pain and ...